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Re: Draft talk on schedule and cost posted




HI Alex,

Thanks for the update. The slides look good. I only have a couple of
cosmetic suggestions:

p 6. First line
Instead of "at the edges" -> at the downstream end of the BCAL module
second line
"at the edges" -> at the end of the module

(There are many edges on the BCAL module. The end is more specific)

you have text which should be in yellow that shows up in
p. 9, "11.2 deg"
10, 11, 12,  "gamma"

Thanks, Elton.


Elton Smith
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On Mon, 20 Jul 2009, Alexander Somov wrote:

> Dear Colleagues,
>
> I put the review slides to
> http://www.jlab.org/~somov/bcal_review_accept.pdf
>
> I will post them tomorrow.
>
> Regards,
>          Alex
>
>
>