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Re: Updated overview document



On Thu, 20 Mar 2008, Curtis A. Meyer wrote:

Dear Curtis,

congratulations the document improved really a lot compared to some days
ago. I went through it and have marked up the pdf file.
You can find it at
http://www.jlab.org/~elke/gluex_999_B.pdf

I have put on the cover page a comment box with general remarks.
I list them quickly here again
general remarks:
- to make the comparison of GlueX and E852 nicer I would add a table which
shows the resolutions for photons and particles for both detectors as well
as acceptance coverage for neutrals and charged particles.

I think it would be better to switch section 4 and 5 as we need first to
identify charged and neutral particles before we can do pid or kinematic
fitting.

it would be nice if some plots could be closer to the text where they are
described, especially at the end of the current section 5.

Concerning your question for the dry run of your talk. I'm not sure we
don't run out of time if you want to implement the suggestions we made and
do a dry run. I'm free, but I don't know about everybody else. it is your
call what you prefer

Good night
elke

> Date: Thu, 20 Mar 2008 16:17:21 -0400
> From: Curtis A. Meyer <cmeyer@ernest.phys.cmu.edu>
> To: GlueX Tracking <halld-tracking-hw@jlab.org>
> Cc: Gluex PID <halld-pid@jlab.org>, GlueX Software <HallD-Offline@jlab.org>
> Subject: Updated overview document
>
> Hi Everyone -
>
>
>    based on the large number of comments received yesterday, I have
> updated the overview document for the review. It is now version
> 6 of document 999. The following is a summary of what has happened
> during the last 30 hours:
>
>    *) Implemented the typographical fixes and most of the comments
>        on the original text.
>
>    *) Performed a major reordering of the document, and then merged
>        the sections into a smaller number of "broader" sections:
>
>        - Introduction
>        - Physics
>        - Physics Analysis
>        - PID
>        - Tracking resolutions and kinematics.
>        - Conclusions
>
>     *) Reworked much of the transition material between the sections and
>         removed material that was duplicated.
>
>     *) Replaced figures with ones provided by David and Elton.
>
>     *) The PID section has had a major rewrite to be consistent with Eugene's
>         talk and not appear to over sale the kinematic fitting.
>
>     *) Made sure that the references are all in the correct order and that only
>         the ones cited are present.
>
>     *) A complete read of the document to smooth out all the changes involved
>         and try to catch gramatical problems.
>
>     *) Run the document through a spell checker.
>
> Please have a look at what is there, I am going to ask some people here to look at
> it as well, but we would like this to go out tomorrow.
>
>  - Cheers  - Curtis
> --
> Professor Curtis A. Meyer        Department of Physics
> Phone:  (412) 268-2745          Carnegie Mellon University
> Fax:    (412) 681-0648            Pittsburgh PA 15213-3890
> cmeyer@ernest.phys.cmu.edu  http://www.curtismeyer.com/
>

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