Re: New Version of Tracking Talk

["Daniel S. Carman" <carman@jlab.org>]

David,

Just a few (minor) comments on your slides.

1. pp.5 : Add a space between "cables" and "(effective material)".
2. pp.9 : Move "Lorentz force" over so that it is not beneath bullets.
3. pp.11 : Add a space between "thrown" and "(signal)".
4. pp.14 : Punctuation not consistent on bullets.
5. pp.24 : Add a space between "passes" and "(~5-10)".
6. pp.27 : Use "packages" and not "Packages" on the last bullet.
7. pp.29 : Why is this included?  I thought it was going to go.
8. pp.30 : What is the message here?  This really ends the talk on
           a negative note instead of a positive one.  Focus on the
           good and not the bad (so to speak).


				Regards,

					Daniel


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