Re: New Version of Tracking Talk

[David Lawrence <davidl@jlab.org>]

Hi Dan,

    Thanks for your comments. I have incorporated (most) of them and 
uploaded a new version to the docDB as GlueX-doc-1000-v5.

Regards,
-David

Daniel S. Carman wrote:
> David,
>
> Just a few (minor) comments on your slides.
>
> 1. pp.5 : Add a space between "cables" and "(effective material)".
> 2. pp.9 : Move "Lorentz force" over so that it is not beneath bullets.
> 3. pp.11 : Add a space between "thrown" and "(signal)".
> 4. pp.14 : Punctuation not consistent on bullets.
> 5. pp.24 : Add a space between "passes" and "(~5-10)".
> 6. pp.27 : Use "packages" and not "Packages" on the last bullet.
> 7. pp.29 : Why is this included?  I thought it was going to go.
> 8. pp.30 : What is the message here?  This really ends the talk on
>            a negative note instead of a positive one.  Focus on the
>            good and not the bad (so to speak).
>
>
> 				Regards,
>
> 					Daniel
>
>
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